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Deception by ~Darknesslover:iconDarknesslover:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


Look at those eyes
Clouded with guilt and lies
They used to be so true
But her deception is bleeding through

Everything's falling apart
It's so confusing within her heart
As tears stream down her face
She just wishes to be erased

I'm sorry, I didnt mean to do it
I'm sorry, but you probably don't give a shit
I'm sorry, I really love you
I'm sorry, I just didn't know what to do

Her mistakes were haunting her
But she didn't want anyone to interfere
She wanted to be left alone
To take care of it on her own

But no
You had to go
And tell it all
Not caring as I fall

I'm sorry, I didnt mean to do it
I'm sorry, but you probably don't give a shit
I'm sorry, I really love you
I'm sorry, I just didn't know what to do

Look at those eyes
Clouded with guilt and lies
They used to be so true
But her deception is bleeding through

Everything's falling apart
It's so confusing within my heart
As tears stream down my face
I just wish to be erased

I'm sorry, I know I let you down
I'm sorry, you can just leave and let me drown
I'm sorry, I don't know who I am anymore
I'm sorry, I'm just so damn sore

(Deception, deception, deception)

I'm sorry, I didnt mean to do it
I'm sorry, but you probably don't give a shit
I'm sorry, I really love you
I'm sorry, I just didn't know what to do

Look at my eyes
Clouded with guilt and lies
They used to be so true
But my deception is bleeding through
©2005-2009 ~Darknesslover
:icondarknesslover:

Author's Comments

a song i wrote kinda about me, i start it out talking about a girl but i eventually admit that its myself im talking about, not some other girl

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~Rains-Emerald Jun 7, 2005, 6:28:59 PM
Wow.

Holy shit.

I can't believe no one has commented on it before, this is, MAGNIFICENT!

:star::star::star::star::star::star-half: Five and a half out of six stars! ^^ ((:heart:'s emoticons))

Remind me of, like, three diffrent poems that I wrote(I don't think they're posted yet though.. o_O) all combined beautifully. I like! yay!

:glomp: You RULEZ ALL TEH POETRY OF DA DOOM-NESS!!

^^; Ignore my random insanity fits.

--
"Honest, I didn't mean to..."

(\ /)
(o.o)
(> < )
This is Bunny.
Copy Bunny into your signature to help him on his
way to world domination.

Oh, by the way, you forgot this... :backstab: XD
:icondarknesslover:
~Darknesslover Jun 7, 2005, 6:58:59 PM
THANK U SO MUCH!!!!! O yay i got stars!!!! Thanks for commenting on some of my work, i don't get comments that often as u can see. Wow, now i'm starting to feel like what i write is actually good, so thanks for that too!

--
&& I only feel safe in his arms.
It's the only place I've ever felt I belonged..
:iconrains-emerald:
~Rains-Emerald Jun 7, 2005, 7:03:43 PM
:glomp: Of COURSE it's good! You just haven't broken into the community!

Hey, maybe I can convince some of my friends to check you out too..? They're all fairly awesome.... ^^;

Erm, at the moment I can only remember QueenVamp613, who goes to my school like most of my DA friends, but, ya... ^^ I shall see. Chimichunga or whatever loves my poems, so I'm sure she'll like yours! ^^ Yay! I made someone feel special!

~~~~~~

:trophy: of Coolness in reponses goes to Darknesslover on June 7th, 2005

--
"Honest, I didn't mean to..."

(\ /)
(o.o)
(> < )
This is Bunny.
Copy Bunny into your signature to help him on his
way to world domination.

Oh, by the way, you forgot this... :backstab: XD
:icondarknesslover:
~Darknesslover Jun 7, 2005, 7:13:37 PM
Hey that would be so nice of u if u convinced some friends to check me out. I would really appreciate that. Note to self.... Must break into community!! I just hope they don't throw things at me...

--
&& I only feel safe in his arms.
It's the only place I've ever felt I belonged..
:iconrains-emerald:
~Rains-Emerald Jun 7, 2005, 7:17:08 PM
XD Oh, don't worry, the only thing they'll throw at you are rotten fruit, empty cans, and bricks. Heh, j/k of course! XD

I'll throw gooey, delicious, soft, chewy and super sweet cyber marshmellows at you if ya wnat.. ^^:

:hug:

--
"Honest, I didn't mean to..."

(\ /)
(o.o)
(> < )
This is Bunny.
Copy Bunny into your signature to help him on his
way to world domination.

Oh, by the way, you forgot this... :backstab: XD
:icondarknesslover:
~Darknesslover Jun 7, 2005, 7:24:32 PM
yay marshmallows!! I'll get the fire ready!!!!

--
&& I only feel safe in his arms.
It's the only place I've ever felt I belonged..
:iconrains-emerald:
~Rains-Emerald Jun 7, 2005, 8:54:17 PM
^_^ Yay! *throws cyber-marshmellows at you* EAT MARSHMELLOWS!!

...

Can I have some fire too? *looks hopeful*

--
"Honest, I didn't mean to..."

(\ /)
(o.o)
(> < )
This is Bunny.
Copy Bunny into your signature to help him on his
way to world domination.

Oh, by the way, you forgot this... :backstab: XD
:iconcyryn:
=Cyryn Jun 8, 2005, 10:41:42 PM
Great... I read the comments before me and now I'm hungry. I don't give out stars... but I did give you nachos! Great work on the chorus, and I enjoyed all the lyrics to be honest. Reminds me of something I wrote in a semi-lyrical format. Need to get that posted soon so I can show you what I mean.

--
"I hope to one day look back on my life and say 'I am proud of what I didn't do.'" Myself, August 01, 2007.
:icondarknesslover:
~Darknesslover Jun 9, 2005, 9:46:16 AM
Thanks for the comment and the nachos!! o sorry about the hunger thing... i know that was last night, but do u want some marshmallows?? I got plenty!!

--
&& I only feel safe in his arms.
It's the only place I've ever felt I belonged..
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